The Good Girl
by SABRINA EDLYN©


Room of hazy blue
amber wafts through
air humid and heavy
she sits on her knees
hands dutifully behind her back
breathing shallow and quick
heart racing so fast
blood just under a boil
glistening appears above her hairline
waiting
waiting
waiting
then....
the temperature in the room rises
he's here
she struggles not to turn and look
must be good
must behave
heat coming from behind
familiar scent, small sigh from her chest
sensation near her right ear
loud tearing, ripping
she tenses
be a good girl
same sound, now in the left
blood flowing faster, skin prickling
breathing quicker
eyes go dark
everything becomes tactile
arms taken apart
one wrist bound
second one
hands bound behind her back
throat dry, gulping air
"Come down here and face me"
stumbling in the dark
trying to be good
wanting to please so badly
"You are such a good girl"
her heart soars with pride
"I want you to please me with your
mouth"
Opening, ready, willing
His scent overwhelming
she moans, her cunt already dripping
Hand on her neck, guiding
she nestles into his palm
He stops
"I have a new toy for you"
she stands up straight
long forgotten sensation
pinching, hard
too much, too much
want to safeword
but want to please
struggling but totally enraptured
thighs quivering
biting her lip
"Is this too much for you, Miss?"
"Yes, Sir. I'm sorry, Sir"
"Not at all, I threw alot at you tonight"
"I'm so very proud of you...."
deep heaving breath
small tears well in her eyes
"Get up"
pushed on the bed
totally prone
assaulted with fear
restraints engaged
he slides in behind
raw and alive
she screams into nothing
lost
lost
her hips totally splayed
she's open, wide open
soaking and swollen
aching for release
sweet release
oblivion
he's hissing in her ear
"You're my little fuck toy"
she comes again
and again
and
again
he roars with delight
liquid fire mixed with
sweet opal fluid
he whispers
"You're my good girl"
Sabrina Edlyn has always been writing, creating and acting since she was very
small. She has just finished a one act play called, "Raised by Wolves" and is in
the process of writing her first novel. She concentrates on what comes from
her mind, whether it's poetry, prose, plays or fiction. She lives with her son and
her very demanding cat. You can reach her at
eimiayumi@gmail.com
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